The sky was engulfed by dark clouds, the luminous moon seems to be in cahoots with the siluotte of withering tree branches. A stretched of trees, followed by another, it seems ever lasting. A chill wind scuffed past, the fog made sight blurry. There were voices, screaming and hollering. Little did I know......
Let me have a guess here. Your story seems to be a horror one!The pale moon and the misty conditions tell me that something might jump out suddenly and scare you to death or perhaps you found something or solved a mystery which puzzled people for ages.
ReplyDeleteI believe its a story on God. I think that you are trying to say that in the current chaotic world of today, where immoral humans completely obscured everything, except the moon. The bright pale moon in this case becomes the guiding star, God, who will lead Earth past its dark ages, despite the current pandemonium in the face of Earth, and into a bright and limitless future.
ReplyDeleteI believe your story will be about one of a furtive figure running away from something or someone to a save sanctuary
ReplyDeleteMy heart is pounding so fast after I read your story. Think your story would be most probably a horror story.The moon, withered trees, mist told me that something spooky might be going on. It is also possible to say that the persona had done something wrong,which was why he was fearful which could be seen from the description of the night.
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Rixin and Chun Yi came the closest guessing the story. It is indeed going in the direction of a horror story, not so much about god as shaodian mentioned, but it was creative though as i did not though of it though.
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